I'm sorry about the rewrites, but stuff needs tightening up. I was only 1/4 of the way through Trinity III when I'd caught a few errors and deleted a few paragraphs because they were pointless or repetitive. So I just uploaded the changes on AO3 and then I'll upload more as I go along.
As for Stuart, he can be a background character, but having five people as members of SG-1 was exhausting since I deal with 8 on a continual basis (SG-1 and SG-2) plus Janet, Hammond, and Jacob. Add Adriann, his folk, others. Stuart can go sit down. ;)
And the same thing applies to the sex in chapters. All I wanted to write was porn and I should have just written side stories instead of making them Trinity or Trilogy chapters. So, that's part of the reason for a rewrite.
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Date: 2018-03-24 02:25 am (UTC)From:As for Stuart, he can be a background character, but having five people as members of SG-1 was exhausting since I deal with 8 on a continual basis (SG-1 and SG-2) plus Janet, Hammond, and Jacob. Add Adriann, his folk, others. Stuart can go sit down. ;)
And the same thing applies to the sex in chapters. All I wanted to write was porn and I should have just written side stories instead of making them Trinity or Trilogy chapters. So, that's part of the reason for a rewrite.
Thanks for being a fan, sweetie. :)